[clug] Feedback on an opinion piece: Why Australian National cyber-Security depends on FOSS

[steve jenkin]

Daniel Black wrote on 27/01/13 2:44 PM:
> On writing style, you come across as too biased rather than portraying
> an unbiased criticism of technologies you obviously disagree with.
> 
> The "other issues" inclusion is distracting and prevents you from
> writing a clear coherent conclusion.

thanks.

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