[clug] MtM - content update

Tony and Robyn Lewis beakysnugger at yahoo.co.uk
Thu Mar 15 04:58:55 GMT 2007

Chris Smart wrote:
> There are two main user interfaces 
> (desktops) for Linux. One is called 'KDE' and the other is 'GNOME'.

Chris, IMO the language of "one is called" sounds a little patronising.  
I would say:

    There are two popular "desktop environments" for Linux, that provide
    a different look and feel to Linux.  One is KDE, the other is GNOME...

I'm not a technical writer, though, and, sorry, I haven't done more than 
glance at MtM - mea culpa :-)


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