svn commit: samba-docs r770 - in trunk/Samba3-ByExample: .

jht at samba.org jht at samba.org
Wed Jul 6 04:50:45 GMT 2005


Author: jht
Date: 2005-07-06 04:50:44 +0000 (Wed, 06 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 770

WebSVN: http://websvn.samba.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi?view=rev&root=samba-docs&rev=770

Log:
Another fix.
Modified:
   trunk/Samba3-ByExample/SBE-Appendix1.xml
   trunk/Samba3-ByExample/SBE-Appendix2.xml
   trunk/Samba3-ByExample/SBE-HighAvailability.xml


Changeset:
Modified: trunk/Samba3-ByExample/SBE-Appendix1.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/Samba3-ByExample/SBE-Appendix1.xml	2005-07-06 04:05:49 UTC (rev 769)
+++ trunk/Samba3-ByExample/SBE-Appendix1.xml	2005-07-06 04:50:44 UTC (rev 770)
@@ -555,7 +555,7 @@
 	<para>
 	The content of the root hints file as shown in <link linkend="roothint"/>  changes slowly over time. 
 	Periodically this file should be updated from the source shown. Because
-	  of its size, this file is located at the end of this appendix.
+	  of its size, this file is located at the end of this chapter.
 	</para>
 
 	</sect2>

Modified: trunk/Samba3-ByExample/SBE-Appendix2.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/Samba3-ByExample/SBE-Appendix2.xml	2005-07-06 04:05:49 UTC (rev 769)
+++ trunk/Samba3-ByExample/SBE-Appendix2.xml	2005-07-06 04:50:44 UTC (rev 770)
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
 	</para>
 
 	<note><para>
-	The successful completion of this appendix requires that you capture network traffic
+	The successful completion of this chapter requires that you capture network traffic
 	using <command>Ethereal</command>. It is recommended that you use a hub, not an
 	Ethernet switch. It is necessary for the device used to act as a repeater, not as a
 	filter. Ethernet switches may filter out traffic that is not directed at the machine
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
 	<title>Introduction</title>
 
 	<para>
-	The purpose of this appendix is to create familiarity with key aspects of Microsoft Windows
+	The purpose of this chapter is to create familiarity with key aspects of Microsoft Windows
 	network computing. If you want a solid technical grounding, do not gloss over these exercises. 
 	The points covered are recurrent issues on the Samba mailing lists. 
 	</para>
@@ -840,7 +840,7 @@
 
 		<step><para>
 		If desired, the Windows XP Professional client and the domain controller are no longer needed for exercises
-		in this appendix.
+		in this chapter.
 		</para></step>
 
 		 <step><para>
@@ -922,7 +922,7 @@
 	<title>Conclusions to Exercises</title>
 
 	<para>
-	In summary, the following points have been established in this appendix:
+	In summary, the following points have been established in this chapter:
 	</para>
 
 	<itemizedlist>

Modified: trunk/Samba3-ByExample/SBE-HighAvailability.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/Samba3-ByExample/SBE-HighAvailability.xml	2005-07-06 04:05:49 UTC (rev 769)
+++ trunk/Samba3-ByExample/SBE-HighAvailability.xml	2005-07-06 04:50:44 UTC (rev 770)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 	<indexterm><primary>performance</primary></indexterm>
 	<indexterm><primary>reliability</primary></indexterm>
 	<indexterm><primary>availability</primary></indexterm>
-	Well, you have reached the chapter before the appendix. It is customary to attempt
+	Well, you have reached one of the last chapters of this book. It is customary to attempt
 	to wrap up the theme and contents of a book in what is generally regarded as the
 	chapter that should draw conclusions. This book is a suspense thriller, and since
 	the plot of the stories told mostly lead you to bigger, better Samba-3 networking



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