[clug] Make The Move update

Jack Kelly endgame.dos at gmail.com
Fri Aug 21 01:15:29 MDT 2009


On Fri, Aug 21, 2009 at 5:02 PM, Chris Smart<mail at christophersmart.com> wrote:
> -stuff-

First thing I see on the sidebar:
"
Make The Move aims to present Linux and open source software as viable
alternatives to the system on your computer.
"
Perhaps replace with:
"
Make The Move presents Linux and open source software as viable
alternatives to the system on your computer.
"
Sounds much more confident.

-- Jack


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